Could someone critique my resume?

I'm applying for a job through craigslist, and I'm going to send them my resume, I would like to know how I can improve it before I send it. thanks so much. Serious critiques pls. I hope it's legible, I copied and pasted onto here.



Name goes here

Address goes here

Continuation of address

Phone # (home) Phone # (cell)

Email address 1

Email address 2



Objective: To obtain employment in an Aldis grocery store.



Work Experience



Employee, A.J. Wright June 2006- January 2007

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Tended to customers needs

鈥?Handled sales transactions

鈥?Handled customer returns and exchanges

鈥?provided friendly customer service



Employee, Quiznos Subs February 2006- June 2006

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Assisted in preparing subs, salads, and soups

鈥?Assist in maintaining a clean, inviting restaurant environment

鈥?Performed daily preparations

鈥?Assisted in training new employees





Sales Associate, Rainbow Shops June 2005 鈥?January 2006

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Tended to customer needs

鈥?Handled sales transactions

鈥?Performed merchandise inventory

鈥?Performed daily markdowns





Employee, Forman Mills December 2004 鈥?January 2005

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Tended to customers needs in the coat department

鈥?Performed nightly merchandise inventory

鈥?restocked coat racks





Waitress, Bennigans June 2004 鈥?August 2004

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Waited tables

鈥?Served food to customers

鈥?Took orders

鈥?Assisted in maintaining a clean restaurant environment







Sales Associate, Sears Department Store January 2003 鈥?June 2004

Baltimore, MD



鈥?Handled sales transactions in various departments

鈥?Tended to customers needs

鈥?Opened and closed register daily

鈥?Assisted in keeping floor clean







Education



Current School im attending now August 2006 鈥?Present

Degree sought after:

Expected Graduation Date:





Previous college attended January 2003 鈥?May 2006

Degree obtained

Graduation Date:



Computer Skills



鈥?Proficient with Microsoft Word and PowerPoint.



References



鈥?Available Upon RequestCould someone critique my resume?
It's very long; you should edit it.
how did you tend to need, etc, think why, when, how, who, etc

good stuff otherwiseCould someone critique my resume?
You may have done this already, but I would do it in the 2 column format so dates are on the left and easy to see:

6/2004 - 8/2006 (Then job title) Assistant Cashier

(Job Place) Ralph's, Garden City, NJ

(Job duties ) Duities included:



That makes the data easier to tease out for the person reading, because they will scan, not read. If you need to get this down to 1 page, you can bundle your bullets such as : Waited full service tables. (inplies served %26amp; took orders); and: Responsible for sales transactions, inventory, markdowns.



I would delete: assisted with keeping the floor clean!!!!!! Moer like: Resposible for general store organization and inventory. Resist listing items that would be expected anyway based upon job description (ie listing job as sales associated %26amp; duties as "sales"



Good luck!!!